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The Race For Lovers

Contributed by JasTrask_22 on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:52:23 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I dont know how it will end, but i know i do like how it starts.
We dont know where we're going, we're just doing our part.
I'm in second and third while you're always in first.
We get tired at each step we take, The road gets longer.
It will curve and be straight again.
Each metre is like a mile which defines the beat of my heart.
It's quiet all around, we can only hear us breathing.
We can only see what eachother is seeing.
The crowd cheers us on because thats all they can do.
We're the ones running and were the only ones who can
Motivate ourselves even though we don't know where we're going.
We can even stop whenever we want to.
But i hope its a green light the whole way through.
There's really no point to this. but we do care about it.
We're raising money to support all the lovers who just go for it.
Even when they dont know the consequences that will follow.
That's the fun of it. That's the important part.
It's okay when we don't know where we're going.
Or when the next curve is coming up.
That's what Love is, and that's what i Love about us.
We're not good at making plans but we do come up with something.
And i think any direction we take, will get us right where we want to go.
..As long as my heart keeps beating, with every mile a minute.
And as long as we keep breathing. We'll make it.

- - ' J a s m i n e * :..

Copyright © JasTrask_22 ... [ 2006-01-18 13:52:23]
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Re: The Race For Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:10:37 AM AEST
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Write from the heart Jasmine, close your eyes and feel what your heart is crying silently about, then let your pen move. You will create masterpieces!

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