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Spoon in Your Mouth
Contributed by
vermilion
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Twistedly wonderful
You scare me so
Into the darkness we go, we go
Repression and horses
That sway to and fro
You scare me, you scare me so
The wooden spoon in your mouth
Not silver
Was born into madness
Into the quiver
Have never
Happily ever
Af-ter…
Seductively evil
You take me in
Into the next time we lay, we may
Blood red and smeared
Across today
Take me, take me as I lay
The plastic spoon in your mouth
Not gold
Was born into darkness
Into the old
Have never
Happily ever
Af-ter
The lava filled spoon in your mouth
Burning
Was born into… this…
Into the churning
Have never
Happily ever
Af-ter
Copyright ©
vermilion
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2006-01-18 06:38:58]
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Re: Spoon in Your Mouth
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:20:34 PM AEST
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| I love random.. Sometimes I think we should all just let ourselves go. Just sit down, and write anything that comes to mind. It's a fun exersise. |
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Re: Spoon in Your Mouth
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:42:46 PM AEST
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simple brillant. Great use of words and it just fits together. i thought this was great and i enjoyed reading it. you have lots of talent and i hope to read more of your poems.
christina |
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Re: Spoon in Your Mouth
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by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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| Spoon in your mouth is what u thought of during science class ... it was wonderful....... |
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Re: Spoon in Your Mouth
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by girlg0newrong on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 01:38:32 AM AEST
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GREAT!
~KINZI |
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