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Unwanted Tragedy
Contributed by
Fiona
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Forgive me Father, for I have sinned...
I am faced with pure hate that is locked within
I long for the courage to take this blade...
And end the pain that has yet to fade
My soul is now black, I have nothing to lose...
This dilemma I’m facing is so hard to choose
Life is unfair, don’t make me go on...
I have been in this hell hole for way too long
Oh please God forgive me...
Just let me die
You have no idea how I hurt deep inside
I’m sorry about yesterday...
I’m sorry about today...
I’m sorry that I threw all my chances away
Please God, have mercy...
I know I’m not crazy
But the joy in my life is faded, and hazy
The knife is now taunting...playing games with my head...
Should I end this life with words left unsaid?
Does my Mom know I love her?
Do my friends know I care?
Do they know that the pain is just too hard to bare?
Why am I hesitating? I want to die...
There is no way in hell you can make that a lie
Do you think I’m afraid, do you think I can’t do it?
Watch me now, there ain’t nothing to it!
The blade has been placed, my vein has been hit.
Oh God, this is it, Why didnt I miss?
Copyright ©
Fiona
... [
2003-01-26 13:20:00]
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by Lia on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 07:32:29 PM AEST
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| wow...aside from the subject of this..which is always a bone chilling subject anyhow...this is brilliant in my eyes...I usually dont' read poems about suicide..because I don't really care to read depressing things that may end up making me depressed..but this captured me. I read it several times and will probably read it again..I even shared it with my hubby who isn't into poetry at all and he liked it. Excellent job here... :) |
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:08:20 PM AEST
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| well wriiten and you are right the lucky ones are the ones that either change their mind or don't succeed. Good poem well thought out and put together |
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:12:37 AM AEST
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Sigh...such a sad topic, but so well expressed...
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by Cancer on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:41:20 PM AEST
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that was the best poem i've ever read. the last two lines gave me chills. i don't know what else to say.
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 01:44:14 PM AEST
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| What a great way to write such feelings down. Beautiful, beautiful poem. |
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Re: Unwanted Tragedy
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 05:09:45 PM AEST
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Wow this is well excellent... this is a gem. Wow this poem is a bit scattered exactly like my brain when I've been cutting. You capture the emotions so perfectly. Wow.
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