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poem 10
Contributed by
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:17:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This black hole that is in my heart,
Cries out for someone,
Anyone,
To fill it.
My cries of anguish,
Are never heard.
My tears fall silently,
Never seen.
So,
Why do I cry?
Why does my heart bleed?
What do I do to make me better?
What do I take?
I'm the same as I always was.
I'm the same as I always will be.
NOTHING!!!
NOTHING AT ALL!!!
I'm useless.
The time will come...
When I disappear completely.
I've got nothing to gain,
And not much to lose.
For this foolish,
Broken heart.
Is in millions of pieces.
Disappearing into the flames of Hell.
Now I'm just a hollow body.
I don't see a point in living.
If I'm just a hollow.
So,
Good-bye cruel world.
My final...
Breath.
Good-bye forever.
Good-bye.
Copyright ©
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
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2006-01-17 23:17:16]
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Re: poem 10
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:34:35 PM AEST
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Re: poem 10
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:07:57 AM AEST
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this poem really moved me. great job. i know the feeling of being useless and wanting to just go away, just dissapear. it will get better, it just takes time. (im sure u probably have heard that a million times and hate hearing it. i used to want to scream when people said that to me. but now i know from experience, it does get better)
stay strong |
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