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A Dying World
Contributed by
OzChick
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 09:24:03 PM in AEST
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The log fire crackles,
Rub your hands, keep them warm.
A hyena cackles,
And a child is born.
The fire dies down.
The hyena's hush.
Another child is born.
The world is in a rush.
We don't slow down.
We just speed up.
The world goes round.
Another throat is cut.
People live, people die.
No one stops to wonder.
No one stops to ask why,
This world is going under.
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OzChick
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2006-01-17 21:24:03]
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Re: A Dying World
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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| Good write. Too many folks here on this earth. Not enough room for anyone else. Won't be long they'll find another planet and destroy the hell out of it too. Humans are a beastly bunch. Enjoy your writes, Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: A Dying World
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:01:37 PM AEST
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well written enjoyed this
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Re: A Dying World
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by princess_of_pain on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:35:04 PM AEST
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| great poem!! i like it a lot |
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Re: A Dying World
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 01:43:35 AM AEST
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Very good write. If u wrote this at fourteen then u had much wisdom and wrote like a pro in the beggining.
luv, huggs,
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Re: A Dying World
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 02:04:15 PM AEST
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| I think this is what a lot of people feel. I liked it. You're very talented, if this was when you were seven. Kep writing! |
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Re: A Dying World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 04:18:47 PM AEST
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| very true hardly anyone stops to think anymore. great poem especially for a first! |
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Re: A Dying World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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Pretty darn good for a fourteen year old!
Tim |
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