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Flowers or Tears
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 08:24:49 PM in AEST
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Candle light glowed across her face
Leaving most pleasant shadows
Her hands softly wiped his sweat away
As she held him to her bosom
She felt him slipping away
Now tears flowed freely
They could pretend no more
That all would be fine
She had loved him for so long
But time would not let them be together
Finally they got a chance
And now this happened
It was for her honor he would die
For he fought valiantly to spare her
A fate worse than death herself
Her father had betrothed her
To a drunken filthy old noblemen
For the title to a piece of farmland
So her love tried to spirit her away
But the nobleman found them
A duel ensued he was struck in the heart
But at the same time he finished off the nobleman
So now the lovers last moments were spent
In an old barn far from the town
Her heart broken she held him as he died
Then in sorrow she gave up her last breath
When they found them there were flowers all around
One for every tear she cried from a heart so true
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 08:31:57 PM AEST
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Oh Shari.....this is so sad..but so beautiful....
Wonderfully related....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:20:26 PM AEST
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This is beautiful imagery and sentiment.
I really like it.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:42:18 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni, it's so sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 02:18:54 AM AEST
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| well written, keep writing! |
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:27:02 PM AEST
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| Sad but very well written :) |
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Re: Flowers or Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:44:22 PM AEST
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| oh my. miss poet, you are a masterpiece writer, your stories in poetic style are out of this world, why I feel your heart speak so clean and pure.. and you know what, I sing all of your poems.. easy to sing with lovely words.. raquelLeah.. :D |
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