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The Lone Soldier
Contributed by
Gunnman
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 06:18:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I walk with no man; I always walk alone
My soul made of fire, my heart of stone
I have no pain; ignoring all that I feel
with bones of iron and nerves of steel
This is what I portray, fooling you all
My emotions so strong, my defenses so tall
but inside I am weak, having unsettled war
not knowing why I battle or what this is for
This war is unending, and isn't new
no shots are heard but damage is true
What is going on here, what is this for
I'm a Lone Soldier in a private war
Copyright ©
Gunnman
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2006-01-17 18:18:08]
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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| a great write ty for posting |
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 06:58:10 PM AEST
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strong write
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 08:36:20 PM AEST
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Wow..I loved this..... So much truth in it.....
Keep them coming..
Jenni |
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 09:52:32 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this write...straight from the soul. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 12:57:15 AM AEST
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You are the only one who can stop that war, but sometimes pride prevents us from doing that. I talk from experience. I'm still going through that war and I know exactly what I need to do to stop it, yet I don't do a thing, crazy hey!
Loevd this flo, true words and true emotion.
Ash~ |
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Re: The Lone Soldier
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:36:48 PM AEST
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| nice write dude well said amen |
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