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Kissed Her Tears Away
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:10:22 PM in AEST
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Before her there he was her walking dream
A quiver through her did flow like a stream
Where had he come from what brought him here
She stared like a doe in headlights paralyzed with fear
He walked over to her and asked her to dance
She melted in his arms she never had a chance
Her heart was already his it had been for years
As a child he had once kissed away her tears
He was a friend of her older brothers
So different from all the others
Sensitive to her moods and scenes
He was never ever to her mean
Ten years have passed since she saw him
Her memories of him never dimmed
Time makes age difference seem smaller
And now she was a good foot taller
He looked in her eyes and saw a tear
He smiled and kissed away all her fear
Reminding her she owed him a date
Even though it was many years late
The wedding was the following fall
He waited for her as he said after all
Her brother was the man that was best
Her love had passed the maturity test
They had children three
Spread out as was her brother and she
She smiled as she watched them play
As a friend kissed her daughters tears away
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Re: Kissed Her Tears Away
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:19:36 PM AEST
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Awww Shari...this held such special meaaing for me... for reasons of my own.
Lovely write..great story....
Oh how I love a happy ending...
Hugs
Smiling Jen.. |
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Re: Kissed Her Tears Away
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:22:34 PM AEST
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| Lovely story :) and very well written as usualy! |
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Re: Kissed Her Tears Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 02:35:12 AM AEST
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| A lovely and well written poem. |
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Re: Kissed Her Tears Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:49:55 PM AEST
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| smiles, almost my life story here with my first husband, I married his best friend, lol. I guess I passed the maturity test too lol.. you are a die hard romantic writer, and I love every drop of ink you place down on paper. raquelLeah :D |
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Re: Kissed Her Tears Away
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th November 2013 @ 11:45:23 PM AEST
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That was very very nice. Really liked the way you showed the progression through their lives as the poem told the story.
Thank you,
Tim |
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