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Let Me Relax You
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Meditate into my body
Release yourself into my mind
Drift among my daydreams
Stay awhile and unwind
Weave your words of seduction
Into every fibre of my being
Massage yourself into my skin
Give sensual, a new meaning
Dance your flaming passion
Here within where I am yearning
Ignite the incense of my soul
Smell sweet jasmine as it's burning
Relax there in it's perfume
Let the magic cast a spell
Then dive into the liquid depths
Of my artesian well
Float here in the calmness
Of all the peacefulness you bring
With fluted tongue,drink of life
From my sacred natural spring
Take of me,replenish your soul
And flowing through you like a stream
I will carry your heart oceans far
In search of all you dream
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-26 11:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:55:29 PM AEST (User
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good write wonderful visuals
Sharon |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 04:24:10 PM AEST (User
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This is beautiful and sensual - an awesome poem. |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:46:31 PM AEST (User
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mmmmm, mmm.....You can relax me anytime. ;o) |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by roisin on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 01:24:11 AM AEST (User
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one of your more sensuous writes...
ta very much
rosie |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 03:29:37 AM AEST (User
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As anticipated your pomes are thrilling. This is a fantastic poem ..exceedingly beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:31:58 AM AEST (User
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Wow, this is SO beautiful. I am absolutely in love with this poem! I love every word of it. It's exquisite. Amazing.
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:01:20 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful images, beautiful and sensual...I love your poetry
Chrissie |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:01:34 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful images, beautiful and sensual...I love your poetry
Chrissie |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mad-Mancunian on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:16:08 PM AEST (User
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Simply wonderful!
I give it 3 thumbs up.
The best sensual and/or erotic poems, I'd say, are ALWAYS those which are the LEAST explicit-hints and indications are always better than being outright obscene.
Take a look at my submission called "Consummation" and tell me what you think. |
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Re: Let Me Relax You
(User Rating: 1 ) by spaceotter on
Wednesday, 7th July 2021 @ 12:10:18 AM AEST (User
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Nice encapsulation of what true love is. Beautiful poem. |
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