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EUPHORIC LOVE
Contributed by
sassydovebird
on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 12:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Here I sit, clock says after seven,
I'm so in in love,isn't it heaven?
The man of my dreams has come to my life,
Recognized dreams;I am now his wife.
How sweet,how wonderful,how caring,my man.
Making me happy,doing all he can.
Nothing too large,nothing too small,
What i desire,he"ll get it all.
I have his love,it is all i need,
To go through this life,
To happily succeeed.
In my heart deep,
And i need him so bad.
He will never make me unhappy or sad.
Tis time for bed,
And I go with a smile,
Knowin he'll folllow soon,in a little while.
Good NIght MY LOVE,I say,then a sweet kiss.
Our life is so lovely,
Nothing amiss.
Love,how sweet ..
Your life it can save.
Opens your heart,
The way for happiness to pave.
Oh just how blessed I am,I do know !!!!
And every day my love to you i will show.
Copyright ©
sassydovebird
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2006-01-17 12:08:09]
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Re: EUPHORIC LOVE
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:29:04 PM AEST
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| This one made me smile :) enjoyed reading it...very good work! |
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Re: EUPHORIC LOVE
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 05:47:02 PM AEST
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okay.
i know where you are coming from, and that is the only thing keeping me from ripping this one open.
your rhyme is forced. bad. that last stanza made me grit my teeth.
yes, we all are happy for you. (not sarcastic.) I just wish you'd spent a bit more time working on your expression! |
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Re: EUPHORIC LOVE
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by SourcefulEnergy on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:44:56 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful poem. I like how you used the commas to pause between words. It slowed me down, so I could feel your lovely expression of this euphoric love. |
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