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Waiting
Contributed by
fielding88
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Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You’re leaving me here out in the dark
And I know you’re feeling things that you can’t start
To begin to understand,
But I can lend that helping hand.
If you just let me in,
Then we have somewhere to go.
Wish upon a star,
Wishing in this way:
For all the effort that I show,
Please, let me be repaid.
The longer I stay out here the longer I
Will know the way you’re feeling has slowly died,
And I’ve no more cause to stay,
And I’ll begin to curse the day.
…But then you smile at me,
And I’ve no reason to go.
Deep inside you are,
Deep inside you’ll stay,
As long as you and I both know
We’ll find our love one day.
One sweet day.
I’m standing in the dark as I wait for you
And you’ll know all the things that I’m going through,
I’d gladly go through again,
As the thought of you remains
Deep inside my heart,
But it has nowhere to go.
Nowhere to go…
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fielding88
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2006-01-16 21:59:18]
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Re: Waiting
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:04:27 PM AEST
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Boy! What a way to celebrate a year! (Congrats BTW!)
I loved this poem....I have read so many great pieces today. I must say I have been quite satified with these wonderful works of art.
One of my favorite lines in this one is:
If you just let me in,
Then we have somewhere to go.
So glad you're at YPDC....
C
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:55:49 PM AEST
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| wow beautiful poem thx for sharing! |
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Re: Waiting
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:47:56 PM AEST
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Cheers on the year, Marc.
This is a heartfelt piece, full of the right stuff. Many people these days just don't understand their own humanity, and they do foolish things. But it sounds like you know something about being a person. Hang in there. Time'll come.
Andrew |
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Re: Waiting
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 11:57:30 PM AEST
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Happy anniversary, Marc! I'm delighted that the turning of the calendar prompted a post from you (and I do so hope there are more to follow!).
This piece tugs at me in any number of ways. I could write a novel here... but will stop of short of doing so (phew!, huh??? *giggles*). Many will recognize themselves in this, I think --- the lucky ones... the very, very lucky ones... will, in a past tense sort of way. Andrew's right, i think --- time'll come, surely... it will indeed.
Wishing you a safe, fulfilling and... reasonably short journey to the inside (while being so bold as to assure you, adamently even, that there is much to be garnered, learned and enjoyed even in the interim),
~Snem |
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Re: Waiting
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 09:29:10 AM AEST
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Nice work, great musical tastes too (I glanced at your home page) well done.
J |
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Re: Waiting
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 01:00:26 PM AEST
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just read thid and im well, im awe
i cant tell you what i truly feel from this write
maybe incredeable
maybe hope
maybe some one who can face all
seems you have
how
your sensitive
your simple
good post
endless |
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