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Traces of her
Contributed by
crow6279
on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:00:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Lingering breath on my skin
memories never forgotten
Like a warm gentle breeze
I feel the traces of her
Her scent still surrounds me
exciting me like no other
My yearning for her so intense
I smell the traces of her
Exquisite flavor on my lips
savored like ambrosia
Hungering for her return
I taste the traces of her
Lustful moans filled the night
like fine music to my ears
Echoes of our coupling entice
I hear the traces of her
Closing my eyes to see
her beauty I cannot forget
Compelling me to search on
I see the traces of her
My body responds in kind
throbbing with unrequited desire
Pulsing in time with my heart
I need the traces of her
My life was once so complete
our bodies melded as one
Our senses in tune to the night
now just traces of her
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2006-01-16 10:00:21]
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Re: Traces of her
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:02:08 AM AEST
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so wistful and bittersweet
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Re: Traces of her
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 06:32:16 PM AEST
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It's so beautiful, but sad. It's like you're talking about a ghost. This is just a beautiful write.
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Re: Traces of her
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 12:35:23 AM AEST
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| Damn, this piece left me with a tear in my eye. So sad...so lonely...you can feel your pain and your longing in this write. Exquisite. Peace to you, Laura |
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