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Bipolar christ
Contributed by
Cancer
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Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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always one extreme
or another
indifference unexceptable
in their crumbling Utopia
return with me to sodom
new eden vanquished
by sin and by flame
prophecy of the End
upon his head
return of failure
abundant in their house of god
resenting the christians
for whom he died
hatred for his father
he can no longer hide
temptations of the flesh
he is unable to resist
bereft of hope, he cries aloud
"Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani?"
and slits wide his wrists
but only tears flow from his wounds
tears he "supposedly" shed for us
mortification, the new act of repentance
accepted by few
Language of the Unformed
escaping the tongues
of those not chosen by He/She
both and yet neither
Using the Majik
and the drinking of blood
no longer a game
but a ritual of survival
sway to the beats of soundless drums
the bones of his cattle beaten on his tomb
the ancient ways of life return
with the Reign of Terror and the Rain of Blood
follow the Unformed and blessed ye shall be
open my eyes
return to sand
memories and pleasures forgotten
Disintegrate
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2003-01-26 09:00:00]
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Re: Bipolar christ
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:40:43 PM AEST
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HI CANCER,
THIS IS VERY GOOD HEART FELT.
THOSE WHO BELIEVE SHOULD NEVER FORGET WHAT GOD DID FOR US ALL.
I LIKE THIS ALOT.I AM A BELIEVER IN JESUS.WELCOME BROTHER.RICHARD CAMPBELL. |
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Re: Bipolar christ
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by Opium on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:43:19 PM AEST
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| Well I am against religious poems, but still I would say it is nice to read what others think |
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Re: Bipolar christ
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by Fiona on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 12:06:48 AM AEST
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| Wow, I don't see how he thought you were accepting God in that poem...hahaha. That's funny. Anyway, I thought it was a well done poem...I have my faith but I am not going to hold anything to you or your poetry...I thought it was beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing. Lots of love, *Fiona* |
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Re: Bipolar christ
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by Cancer on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:00:32 PM AEST
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i don't understand how he got that either, but i guess perception is a powerful tool.
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Re: Bipolar christ
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:58:45 PM AEST
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Wow this freaked me out for some reason very interestingly written. Why was it on blue paper? Do you remember at all writing this? PM me...
Bobo (Joel) |
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