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Here is my poem Drowning.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 03:50:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am drifting off as I was driving, I feel like I am drowning .
I am dreading and dreaming and hating the fact of drowning.
I am falling back into a dream and I am fearing the drowning again.
When I went jogging I was only kidding .. when I told you that you would be the one to do the dusting.
As I was dusting I heard someone knocking ,and then I realized it was you.
I knew I had been missing you because of the passing days.
You are always passing me by and you don`t even notice me are the messing place.
I miss the kidding around we used to do and the screaming of the two neighbors next door.
But now everything is lacking in this , so I guess I will just have to go on and keep dusting.
I am fearing the feeling I get when the hating and the begging of the two neighbor's next door.
So I go off to sleep again and dream of drowning.
And I wake to my scream , I just don't want to do this anymore dream of drowning it's scares me.,
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Re: Here is my poem Drowning.
(User Rating: 1 ) by LifeFadingAway on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 05:35:11 AM AEST (User
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I like it, dreams mostly have a meaning behind it but the person who dreams it is the ony one who can understand the true meaning. |
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Re: Here is my poem Drowning.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:24:43 AM AEST (User
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i like this your poetry certainly gives one somthing 2 grab on 2, very captivating right 2 the end . . .
Ben |
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Re: Here is my poem Drowning.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 11:58:04 PM AEST (User
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It makes perfect sense to me but it sounds more like a night mare rather than just a dream.
Keep up the good writing.
huggs,luv,
emy |
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Re: Here is my poem Drowning.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:28:58 PM AEST (User
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oh how many times have I drown, and woke up only to keep dusting. Dusting is ok, it will keep you from drowning, I can feel through your words how much you are reaching out, letting the reader know just how much you care and love. Raquel Leah |
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