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In Death
Contributed by
conleyl
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Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 10:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wipe my tears sweet baby
all of this for you.
Close your eyes now, dream of me.
You pull me close
i whisper in your ear
wake up i disapear.
Copyright ©
conleyl
... [
2006-01-15 22:07:31]
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Re: In Death
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..Nice start....
Keep at it..
Jenni |
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Re: In Death
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:18:26 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC may u enjoy ur time on this pleasant site.
This is a good first submission. With each write u submit you'll find that your writing will get better. Well done.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: In Death
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 04:23:20 AM AEST
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Nice write on this poem!! welcome to ypdc
and i didnt see anything wrong with this poem..
I thought it was a very good write:) |
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Re: In Death
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by bernard2 on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 04:53:51 AM AEST
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| Welcome to YPDC do not worry too much about your poem we all had to start somewhere. Just keep sending in new poems they will be read even if no-one comments so do not be too disapointed when the comments are not all that you would like them to be. I love comments good or bad. bernard2 |
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