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the core
Contributed by
phishbates
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Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:25:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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it calls me in my sleep,
wakes me from the depth of nothingness
pleading to be brought back to active duty, full time.
memories haunt my soul,
i beg god to answer, how can i despise and lust,
the same beast?
i've scarred and tainted everything with my lust.
i took to have, i gave to keep,
no truer truths than a waisted youth,
for this i will always weep.
racing thoughts romanticizing the evil i,
questioning what is and was real
desiring more, just once more
injected fun, youth, peace, freedom...
smoke a better day,
drink a new beginning,
blowing a hole in my head
would have the same effect,
only that doesn't wake me from the dark
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2006-01-15 15:25:51]
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Re: the core
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:58:15 PM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoo friend,
this is one deep, wide, humongeous, awesome writing.
U got some power behind yo pen there!
speechless, hugs,
emy |
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Re: the core
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:55:50 PM AEST
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huh...fantastic, especially the last stanza. loved it.
--tali
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