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Let this go
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:31:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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let me breath
choking from my sympathy
torn apart
by all the things you say
and we walk
a narrow path of destiny
and we break free
from apathy
it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me
it's deafening when you scream
and your words run through me
and my whole world
falls apart when you are not around
and i try so hard to see you now
let me go
choosing everything we see
i hate this place
but i don't want to leave
we keep trying
to let this go
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MajesticPoet
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2006-01-15 11:31:39]
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Re: Let this go
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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| Honestly, this is a good poem. But, it has a twisted sort of ring to it. I am almost unsure of the message you were trying to get across. Unless your message was, "BE CONFUSED" or "I am confused." I don't really kno, but besides the confusion, nicely written? |
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Re: Let this go
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by sirbflean on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:09:08 PM AEST
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this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
not with a bang but a whimper.
t.s.elliot
"the hollow men" |
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Re: Let this go
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by sirbflean on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:11:38 PM AEST
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this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
this is the way the world ends
not with a bang but a whimper.
t.s.elliot
"the hollow men" |
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Re: Let this go
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by MajesticPoet on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:13:26 PM AEST
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| ummmm... ok.... |
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Re: Let this go
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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interesting seems the wanting and knowing it is better to leave fighting
NS |
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Re: Let this go
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by LifeFadingAway on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 06:00:49 AM AEST
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Good poem
It would be a good song lyrics |
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