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(In This) Sea of Rancor
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 06:50:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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All these eyes
For dissolution
Can't help seeking
Some restitution
Without charging
I could charge you
But you'd have to pay me
In your Black and Blue
Who am I to ask?
I could ask your soul
But I don't ask nothin'
You retain control
Or what you pass off
As an equal weight
But you can't shake off
Your bulldozer Fate
As you can't shake me
When I set my mind
Are you afraid
Of what we might find?
Believe in me
And I'll do the same
In you, as a hiccup
There is no shame
In following us
To the bitter end
Exploration of paths
The hand of a friend
Is as great as
Any ol' anchor
That you might find
In this sea of rancor
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2006-01-15 06:50:16]
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Re: (In This) Sea of Rancor
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by Shmokin on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 07:58:51 AM AEST
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| good work, i liked this :-) |
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Re: (In This) Sea of Rancor
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 09:15:24 AM AEST
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you did a good job describing true friendship-
Peace and Light |
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Re: (In This) Sea of Rancor
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:02:37 AM AEST
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awsome poem, i love the flow of it, and great rhyming scheme too! keep it up ;)
Jenni xxoo |
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