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Long Awaited Disaster
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
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Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:32:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Prolonged, the moments
So surreal
Wounds turned to scars
Now hard to heal
Pained hope and waiting
Not in vain
Sprung from sadness
So much to gain
Afraid to falter
Can't believe
Fragile card house
Won't risk to breath
So trepidacious
Can't look back
Though cannot see
Consumed in black
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2006-01-15 00:32:26]
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Re: Long Awaited Disaster
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by girish on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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if you have really lost your love, read my poem on "A desire for reunion"and send that to your love. the person will definitely return.i wish you rejoin.
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Re: Long Awaited Disaster
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 02:03:20 AM AEST
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| nice poem. |
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Re: Long Awaited Disaster
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:48:57 PM AEST
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A sad heartflet poem penned so well. So little words can say so much. Time heals all wounds. I wish u the best of luck.
*heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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