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cant think of a title
Contributed by
kiza
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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counting the secounds until you can go home,
but when you can,you dont want to,so you hang around alone,
the shadows are growing under your feet,
as the friction between us increases the heat.
they old wounds open up,and carry on bleeding,
they do it again,and again,and now have you pleeding.
you've built a shild of there lies,which protects you when u close your eyes,
i no of the tears that people have cried,
and the feeling that no one is on your side,
i no of the countless knights you spent praying,
and the haunting sound of the words they were sayin.
there cold laughter all around you,where ever you turn,
piercing so deep, the laughter seems to burn.
the fear and fustration,and hatered you feel,
with such deepnes and enthusiasm,they almost seem unreal,
and you no that one day youll get away,
but the wounds constantly deepen until that day.
Copyright ©
kiza
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2006-01-14 18:56:26]
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Re: cant think of a title
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:45:21 AM AEST
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| nice emotions |
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Re: cant think of a title
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by JenJen on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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WOW!! this is really good!! i enjoyed reading this poem! i no about this, not a nice feeling!
"i no of the tears that people have cried,
and the feeling that no one is on your side," i no that exact feeling! its horrible!! good luck!!
You are a gr8 writer!! keep it up
/Luv
~*~ JeN ~*~
~*~ XxX ~*~ |
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Re: cant think of a title
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:42:20 PM AEST
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| I agree, I really liked this write. Keep it up! :-) |
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