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I will destroy the sun
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 02:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I will destroy the sun,
In all of it’s golden splendor.
Use my permanent marker,
Attempt to blot out the light,
That radiates like perfume.
I will demolish the superfluous day,
Steal the gay aura from the orb,
Allow the peace of the night to roam,
Free the misunderstood veil.
Create the absolute power she so deserves.
I will make day the foul hour,
And permit the night to rule supreme.
Show them that night is without comparison.
Then all shall know of Night’s true beauty,
And realize that the mysterious day is illusion.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2006-01-14 14:17:53]
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Re: I will destroy the sun
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:27:41 PM AEST
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| i love this...brilliant..it is beauty within darkness..awsome write. |
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Re: I will destroy the sun
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by girish on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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black is beauty and your poem indicates that. nice piece. but the real beauty is seen with the light. thanks for sharing. read my poems on nature.
girish |
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Re: I will destroy the sun
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:44:27 AM AEST
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great write, i feel the same way, everyone sleeps during night missing the most beautiful show of stars and the moon! thanks for sharing, keep it up!
Blessed Be
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: I will destroy the sun
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:16:06 PM AEST
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I really like ur style of writing. The imagery u cast into ur readers head is dynamic. The rhyme and flow sensational. A brilliant and well penned poem filled with darkness.
Awesome writing. Well done Ash.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: I will destroy the sun
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by Midnight on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
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you make me want to talke churchills class ash well keep up the good work sory i dont have much to say
~ midnight |
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