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knife
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 02:56:59 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I am so tired of begin a housewife.
So I go and buy a knife because I hate life.
I feel such like a lowlife.
I want to stab myself with the knife.
Everyone is always telling me I am such a lowlife.
I dont sleep because I love the nightlife.
I dont want to do this anymore.
I dont want to be called a lowlife anymore.
I just want to go live the nightlife.
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butterflygirl40
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2006-01-14 02:56:59]
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Re: knife
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by XXpurpleducktapeXX on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:31:30 AM AEST
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this one is kinda odd ... eh ... don't get a knife that would be horrible i would miss ya.. ha we both live the nightlife wooooo go us love ya
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Re: knife
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:42:21 PM AEST
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| good job, yes buy the knife, but do not give in to sorrow, and for goodness sakes, cut up some vegetables with it, or bread, I love the ending, way to go... nightlife.. I love it too.. something about at night, a magic in it.. tonight is my magic night.. lovely poem.. good ending Raquel Leah |
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