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Seduction by Chocolate
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 12:15:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The deceptive shell hides the sin,
Within
Resembling sweet,
Seduction
As you taste the silent,
Temptation
As you attempt to restrain from,
Wanting
It is possible to persuade yourself in taking just one,
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AshRayne
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2006-01-14 00:15:47]
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Re: Seduction by Chocolate
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by Spike on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 07:29:32 AM AEST
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Hey Ash,
Man, I really liked it! The staccato rhythm established by the well-placed punctuation really made this. Plus it was an experienced insight into how we rationalise our indulgences. Glad you posted.
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Re: Seduction by Chocolate
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by Midnight on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 06:13:54 PM AEST
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mmmmmm... chocolate LOL. another succes. It's different Ash, and im mean very different but i like it alot great write.
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