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i give up
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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i quit
im giving up
sleeps not coming
the sandman
has skipped my house
i watch as the seconds
turn to minutes
which drag into hours
ill give up now
whats another night
with out sleep
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Re: i give up
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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it must be in the air we can start the walking zombie club eh?
I liked how this fit perfectly with that feeling
opf tossing and turning and getting no sleep I know this well
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Re: i give up
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by Drapes on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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Interesting...I like it though. And I know what you mean!!
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Re: i give up
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 07:12:43 AM AEST
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Re: i give up
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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interesting poem.
-phil |
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