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As Eagles Soar
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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She had always dreamed
Of soaring high
Like the eagle
Reaching for the sky
To the mountains
She had fled
Freedom among nature
No more crying joy instead
Climbing the cliffs
Ever higher she went
Stopping finally
Her energy spent
Across a divide
He stood on a ledge
Dressed in buckskin
He jumped off the edge
Arms out to his side
Falling, spinning but no fear
As she watched
He seemed to disappear
Before her eyes
He transformed
Into an Eagle
A magnificent reform
The eagle soared
High above her head
Then came down near her
She was frozen never fled
Spreading his wings
He once more changed
Into this man although young
With much wisdom aged
He offered her his hand
Said she also could be free
She took his hand and soared
This is where she wanted to be
So over the earth
You can see their shadows fall
And know she is
Finally happy once and for all
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NoSaint
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:45:47 PM AEST
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| Well done! I think ur poem bringz out alot of emotion i just wrote a poem great mninds think alike! |
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:55:47 PM AEST
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Shari this is simply lovely I could see it all happening so graciously in my mind's eye!
Romantic, and tantilizing as always are your writes..........a pleasure to read anytime.
Warm love
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 04:07:36 PM AEST
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Shari a very enthralling and wonderfully written poem you have presented us with. You're a very remarkable and talented poetess who can always mesmerize her reader with such creavtive poems. Thanks for sharing ur awesome work with us.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 05:05:01 PM AEST
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| Such a beautiful and romantic image of love and passion. Wonderful as always maam...Russ |
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:00:32 PM AEST
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| pretty pretty Shari, Bravo! |
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Re: As Eagles Soar
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:57:16 PM AEST
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| beautiful free spirit this poem is filled with freedom.. made me feel like soaring raquelLeah |
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