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GRIEF
Contributed by
sassydovebird
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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WHY DO I DESPAIR ?
WHY FEELIN FRIGHT?
NOTHING HERE,ONLY DARKNESS OF NIGHT.
NO ONE TO HURT
NO ONE TO KILL
HEART IS DYING
NO WAY TO HEAL.
SOUL IS BLACK
HEART NOW DEAD
FEELIN ALL SAD
SOUL OF LEAD.
TRUE LOVE IS GONE
WHERE CAN IT BE
GONE FAR AWAY
NOWHERE TO SEE.
COME BACK HEART
COME BACK SOUL
COME BACK LOVE
MAKE THIS PERSON WHOLE.
Copyright ©
sassydovebird
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2006-01-12 22:58:56]
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Re: GRIEF
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by bluebird on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 12:55:58 AM AEST
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im not a fan of this rhyming scheme but u completed it very well. If you extended this poem it would be very impressive
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: GRIEF
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by girish on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:02:17 AM AEST
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read my poem "A desire for reunion" in the seciond page of my account. Post the poem to your loved one. the person will definitely get united. once it had already happened. i wish your love succeed. read my other love poems, poems on my marriage etc. as well.
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Re: GRIEF
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by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:21:30 PM AEST
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| Despair is the death of hope but faith restores all hope. Very well written ! |
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