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poem 6
Contributed by
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It feels as if,
The cold,
Cruel hands of Death,
Have taken my heart out from within the cavity of my chest,
And eaten it.
But,
Before doing so,
Torturing,
Whipping me,
Until the welts on me,
Are so big,
And hideous,
Anyone who sees them,
Will turn away in disgust.
They will be horrified,
At the sight of them.
This pain hurts,
But not as bad this broken heart,
That no one will ever see.
A broken heart can last a lifetime.
These welts on me will just be scars,
But my heart will never heal.
For the welts,
I would cry for two-three weeks.
But for my broken heart,
The tears will run endlessly.
Never stopping.
How do you heal a broken heart?
Suicide.
Death.
Whatever you want to call it
Ask for help and you get none.
So why do I bother?
It's pretty pointless.
So,
Death,
If you want my heart,
Come get all the pieces and eat it.
It's all yours.
Because I'm finished using it.
For good.
Copyright ©
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
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2006-01-12 21:28:25]
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Re: poem 6
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by SilentPwn on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:50:35 PM AEST
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"It feels as if,
The cold,
Cruel hands of Death,
Have taken my heart out from within the cavity of my chest"
I love this part. How it sets the poem, and drew me in was great. |
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Re: poem 6
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by bluebird on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 01:00:51 AM AEST
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wow thia was awesome. the way u captured the feelings was great.
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: poem 6
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by Drapes on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 01:06:12 PM AEST
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That's really good. You really put me in the mood. And good luck to you.
-Drapes- |
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Re: poem 6
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by Forgotten_soul on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 01:41:14 PM AEST
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I thought I was dark, untill I read your poetry. you
realy know how to make people depressed. your my hero! |
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