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What Did I Do?
Contributed by
poetryfreak13
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:36:41 PM in AEST
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What did I do dad?
I have no idea. What I did to tick you off.
I just want to be myself
to let the sadness shine through.
To express myself
and to let everyone know
that I am NOT as happy and cheerful
as I seem.
I am a person
in the sea of faces
just waiting to be noticed
and be the real me,
which I don’t even know.
Who am I?
I have no idea.
I wish someone
would save me.
I am lost,
trapped in a world
of hate.
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2006-01-12 20:36:41]
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Re: What Did I Do?
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:25:39 PM AEST
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This is deep and a nice poem. There is hope though.
Take care.
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Re: What Did I Do?
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by Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:40:34 PM AEST
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how true this poem is about a LOT of people who do not accept other people for who they want to be... wonderful poem...
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Re: What Did I Do?
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by bluebird on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 01:22:44 AM AEST
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this is a great poem. hop eto read more of ur stuff. and im on ur side, theres nothing wrong about becoming a goth,as long as u dnt become one of those suicidle ones. as long as ur happy nothen else matters.
~keep the faith~
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Re: What Did I Do?
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 07:50:30 PM AEST
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Nice write. And I know what you mean about your Dad...I've been in some kind of the same place.
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Re: What Did I Do?
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by Forgotten_soul on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:13:06 PM AEST
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you can be anything you want to be!
I'm goth, and its fine to be goth.
you don't have to be cheary and love the world.
I'm very depressing.
You dad should be happy for you to do something like that! |
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