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dream girl
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:23:37 PM in AEST
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you look at me in eyes of blue
that radiance i see so true
a wrinkled smile with laugh line of joy
you flutteryour eyes oh what a ploy
with one word you have me on my knees
one look and you can satisfy my needs
your nail scratch a war wounde with pride
my hearts so fond with you i cannot lie
this fear in me when your away
the exploits in the bedroom when we play
my love of my life a dream come true
to bad its a dream when i see you
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Re: dream girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:29:09 PM AEST
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don't worry about the lenght of this poem it's say alot more than u realize, and who know's that dream just may come true, great poem,
your a genuine writter . . .
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Re: dream girl
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 06:34:56 PM AEST
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Sweet
I couldn't comment any shorter.
I liked this.
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