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Bloody Smiles
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Blood drips on the white tile
A smile in the darkness
Blood falling on my tounge as I lick my arm
Oh world! How cruel you've been!
Pushing your silver blade of war and chaos down my throat
Hatred driving me insane
I suck the salty red liquid from my body
Listen O dark and heartless world!
To the words I never say
The tears I will never shed
For fear that I'm wasting them on your deaf ears
With each cut, With each drop of blood down my throat
My pain slips away
Death may befall me
And grief shal reign through the land for a time to come
But know now that my soul will soon be at ease
Knowing I'm away from the torment, poverty, and grief
Far away from the hate, and the fighting
So, again, I slit my veins
To drink in the sweet retribution
And hope that one day
You cruel world full of chaos
Will hear my silent cries
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DesolantDreamer
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2006-01-12 20:17:19]
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Re: Bloody Smiles
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by Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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this is a very good peom... very realistic to me... I could actually picture what was happening as I was reading it...
this kind of resembles my style of poetry to come... I have all my poems posted on another site and am slowly posting them on here... you should read one sometime if you wish... |
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Re: Bloody Smiles
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 03:44:45 PM AEST
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| your poem is amazing you can really imagine that it is real and you think how powerful it is! |
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Re: Bloody Smiles
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by Kamal on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:29:01 AM AEST
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Whoa I feel your pain it stimulates my brain to explain
the reason why life is so beautiful no matter how evil our people live to do whatever it takes to stand against you and me..
Peace & love and ask God for protection from our enemies and read Pslam 98 |
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