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untitled
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 07:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dare you not to say you've laid eyes upon hells roaring fire for when you see this bleeding flame you not only see the pain of the passed or the damned the pain takes hold of your body, mind, and soul like a fly in a trap, you breathe the pain feel and live the way pain torches lost in hells flame in twinned with all others you soul above your body hovers
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 02:27:32 PM AEST (User
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This poem was quite descriptive and vivid> I can't think of any suitable titles either but good job noneoftheless! |
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