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long poem
Contributed by
Honesty_strikes_my_pen
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 07:10:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I went out with you
knowing your reputation
I knew you had no true feelings for me
but I risked devastation
Things were fine
for a week or two
then the table turned
and I saw the real you
tears in my eyes
shouting out "why?!!"
with friends around
I began to cry
they understood
I had been played
my love was still strong
but your love had strayed
chunks of my heart
had been tattered and bruised
but you didn't care about me
or that i was used
If I knew your title
why did I risk mine?
to be with the one
I thought was fine
Fine on the outside
but not on the in
for I will never
be with him again
I am now with
the guy of my dreams
understands me completely
although it seems...
You are begining
to see what you've lost
You broke my heart
You must pay the cost
Closed up
in the back of my mind
Is where I search and search
but I can't seem to find
Any excuse
for what you did to me
Maybe there are a few...
that I can't see
I am done searching
for hidden clues
With my back turned
I will leave behind the blues!
Blues you have caused me
making me ache
reality settling in
no chances left to take
So now I am going
leaving you here
time left untouched
has awakened my fear
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2006-01-12 19:10:50]
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Re: long poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 10:03:42 AM AEST
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| Il ove the inner searching for what is right for you and you wrote it so well. thanks for sharing the deepness of your heart....Mike |
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Re: long poem
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 04:36:26 PM AEST
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You have the amazing ability to be able to express ur inner thoughts/feelings so well. You speak from a pained heart. Time heals all wounds. A very well penned and delivered write. Chin up and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
*warm heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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