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Web of Days
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 07:19:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Web of days.
Web of lies.
Web of life before my eyes.
If you knew...
If you knew...
If you could feel the web get shorter.
Flickering like a candle.
Burning hot and bright.
Gone in the darkness.
Gone like life.
My web is complicated.
It spans over worlds.
It coonects me to heaven.
It pulls me to hell.
It's a web of lies for every fantasy I forgot.
It's a web of life for every time my heart stopped.
Web of days.
It haunts me.
Watch as the web of days grows shorter.
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2006-01-12 07:19:04]
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Re: Web of Days
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 07:39:10 AM AEST
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An excellent write and description!
Good work :) |
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Re: Web of Days
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by igba on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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| it sure does.very imaginative |
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Re: Web of Days
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 11:47:11 AM AEST
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| liked this a lot, well done. Auf Wiedersehen :> |
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