|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Night Waltz
Contributed by
Spike
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:09:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
You who are so full of light,
Give yourself to mother night
Here beneath the moon’s soft glow,
No one else will ever know
Slip between the cracks of light,
And don the shadows of dark night
Dance with me in ebon glow,
No one else need ever know
Weave the silk of darkest light
As hearts beat one inside the night
Share secrets learned in supine glow
For you and I to truly know
Soon the shards of morning light,
Like golden arrows pierce the night
Go swiftly with your face aglow,
And only I will ever know.
Copyright ©
Spike
... [
2006-01-12 03:09:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 06:00:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautifully written! Good work :) |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by igba on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 08:45:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice flow |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:34:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Words, that flowed with elegance........Pic was cool as well.
Brew~ |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:41:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well done nice smoothly flowing poem. I enjoyed my read bernard2 |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a peaceful serene write I wanted to dance
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:31:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Loved the feeling of tranquillity I got after reading this...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:32:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You know whatever u write about u always do it with style. Your work is always so captivating and intriguing Spike. I loved the pic it adds a glow to the beautiful and perfectly penned write of urs. I thoroughly enjoy reading your poetry my dear friend.
Keep up the fantastic work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:09:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very nice work. Perfect meter & the poem flows like music. I think this should be read with a little waltz music in the background. Cool pidture too!
Butch |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:10:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very good. I just wish it was longer. |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
"No one else will ever know"
this speaks to me. i think this is my favorite poem of yours, even though its the second one i've read. i adore it.
~Ash |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:37:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Pure elegance
beautifully done |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:30:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautifully composed work. This flows very well, excellent use of the AA BB rhyming pattern. Exactly how it should be done.
J |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 04:59:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What a perfect title!! So flowing and soft were the words, spike. And I love how you used the
same words at the end of each line in each stanza. The repition amplifies the waltz theme, I
think. Your cleverness and poetic prowess is, to me, so cunningly hidden under your ability
to just .... ....well ... ....just write.
Whatever it is that cascades from your willing pen is, in my opinion, always and ever a treat
and severly under-rated. Thanks for this. It has created a definite mood ... and one that
is pleasant to visit.
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 11:29:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
exquisite poem and love the pic too:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:46:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Uh. I danced in the moolight, maybe it was only starlight ... or maybe it was just your light. Thank you for shining on us such a wonderful moment. |
|
|
Re: Night Waltz
(User Rating: 1 )
by violet on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:50:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| sounds just as beautiful as william wordsworth's writings............. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
