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In Need
Contributed by
unlovedchild
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I call to you
But you hear nothing
I need you
Where are you
I cry for you
But you don't hear my cries
Why are you hiding
Avoiding me
I scream for you
But you just turn away
Can't you hear my pain
I strive for your acceptance
I reach for you
But you close your eyes
I need you
Where are you
Please ...
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2006-01-12 02:30:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lin54 on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 11:33:20 AM AEST (User
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Your poem sounds like my daughter's cries for her Dad to love her. He usually just notices everything he perceives is wrong and yells at her--but can't understand why she complains back.
I feel your hurt in this!
Lin54 |
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