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In the Midst of You
Contributed by
Aquaelius
on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 12:22:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Ah... lunch.
Meat and rice, good... hardy.
Man's meal.
Oh yeah, look smooth... you're smooth, so smooth.
Hup, there she is... here's your chance big guy.
Okay, eyes... look straight ahead, look pensive.
Not too pensive, steady... you're smart, smooth and smart.
Now hands, move... securely, I'm a confident man.
Oh yeah, watch me drink my coffee.
I'm smooth, smart... Latte in hand.
Bite your lip, look troubled... Only you can save me now, baby.
Smart, smooth... and troubled.
Not too worried, just worried enough... man's worry.
I'm a man, sweetheart... I got problems, manly problems.
Come on darling... you know you want to talk to me.
Find out what's wrong, come on...
Look at me, look at meeeee... oh yeah...
Oh! Uhhhh... look strong, arms flex... HUP!
Yeah, I'm smart, smooth... strong.
Sip the coffee... sip the coffee.
Not too loud... just loud enough.
Sophisticated... strong and sophisticated.
Smart, smooth...
I'm the man of your dreams baby!
(Say something... something cool:
I miss the sunrise in the morning...
but now I saw you and remembered how beautiful it is.)
"HI!"
(No! not that... uhhh... uhhh...)
"That's tea ya drinkin'?"
(Oh my god... what just happened..)
"Damn you look FINE!"
(Stop... please stop... what's happening to me?)
"S-s-s-s-sunrises and you are great!"
(Got to get control...)
Lips stop moving, you're a man... men talk, lips don't move.
Raise the eyebrow... look debonair...
Smile... yeah not too big... you got it, you're the man!!
That's it, a little while longer... raise the hand, point.
Bob head.
Oh yeah, that's the look she wants... couldn't handle it, eh?
Had to leave.
You the man, she wants you... oh yeah...
You... the... man!
Copyright ©
Aquaelius
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2006-01-12 00:22:24]
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Re: In the Midst of You
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by x0pium on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:29:35 AM AEST
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This definately made me laugh a little bit.
It was a humerous, but still good, write.
I liked it.
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Re: In the Midst of You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:31:24 AM AEST
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O.K., very creative,
huggs,
emy |
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Re: In the Midst of You
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by dalamar on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 04:03:03 PM AEST
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thank you so much for putting a smile on my face and that was right on to what is going on in side our heads.
~Dalamar |
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Re: In the Midst of You
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by europeanprincess on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 04:48:14 PM AEST
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| Very creative. I liked this one so much. So did you eventually get the girl? (smlies) I had to lol for this one. Thanks. |
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