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A Dark Death

Contributed by JordonsBaby17 on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 11:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My Knife is Silver & blood red
You shutter as you bleed to death.
I watch, amused. you think I'm not real.
I know you do. your eyes hide nothing anymore.
Im real sweetie, and your really dying.

Your lifeless body stares up at me, like you will
Come back to haunt me. You will, they always do.
Your nothing to me now. You hurt me one too many times.
Yes, now I wash my hands of this. No one will know of
Your evil ways. It has stopped.

I study this body in front of me, thinking. This isn't good
enough! I must cut off your arms. Then maybe your eyes,
With a very dull knife, make me work at it! Your blood is like
Red sugar to me. I'll always remember this moment, Billy.
Your body is tormented by the very person you tormented.

Now we move onto your legs. You don't need them anymore, do you?!
I didn't think so! Should I use a saw? Naw, too common. A Knife?
Too much work! Ahhh! I know! An axe. Mmm, thats relaxing, to cut them off.

You talked about Jordon! You never knew him! How can you talk about someone
You've never even met?! That's not very nice! You should have been nicer to him.
I wasn't being mean! I couldn't just let you talk bad about him, now could I?! NO!
DON'T DO THAT AND YOU WON'T DIE!

Billy, I never wanted us to beon bad terms after we broke up.
You lied to me, to get me back, didn't you?! Shutup! Don't argue!
You told me that you changed. you never changed, though! I didn't want you
Anymore did I? That's why you went after Jordon. I hate you.

I hold your manhood. I drop a butcher knife on it. I've wanted to do that forever!
Now, let's disect you. Slowly, carefully up from the belly-button to the chest, then up to the neck.
Laughing all of the way! We're open for business, Folks! Heart anyone?! Lung?
Guts? Oh! My bad, you had none of them did you?!

I'm bored. Let's light you on fire! I've always wanted to do that too!
You made me think I was the nutty one! I wasn't though! You were! I was
Just trying to be in love with you.You would say "Your pretty, Paula", then
Act like I wasn't! Do you see it now?! I'm SANE! You aren't! Now that
Your destroyed beyond recongniton, I'm going to start on your clothes!
Let's cut them! Then we can bury them in your remains and let some poor starving animal
Feed.

When I met you, I never knew it would be this horrible! You made my life a living-hell!
You were so sweet before! You made me all kinds of cute pictures, and even a movie!
You know, I actually thought you were different. Girls say that all of the time. Now I know why,
But that's ok! I have a GOOD guy now. He doesn't call me a ***** or whore, then try to
Love all up on me. He ALWAYS loves me. Can you do that?! NO!

Good-bye Billy.




Copyright © JordonsBaby17 ... [ 2006-01-11 23:09:56]
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Re: A Dark Death (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 12:12:16 AM AEST
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first, i would like to say congratulations for getting over this, and finding someone new. second, that i enjoyed this poem, it reminded me of the "seed of chucky".

~Ash


Re: A Dark Death (User Rating: 1 )
by xMyxBleedingxHeartx on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 12:40:18 AM AEST
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Nice Poem. Sometime I feel like I've wanted to do that to my ex. But I got over him. :) Keep it up!


Re: A Dark Death (User Rating: 1 )
by WhyAmIHere on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:01:45 PM AEST
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I'm not sure what to say. I know that I liked it though. I like they way you think too.




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