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Part II: Battle

Contributed by darkscorpio on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:33:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In the not so distant future, in a battle of the mind
The warrior, more machine than man, is looking to find
Traces of his heart, an emotional remain
Reasons to why he went through so much pain
She challenges him, he comes out firing, his weapons of the cold
He is quicker and faster though he's getting old
His eyes pierce her armour, she feels the aftershock
She tries and tries but she can not get through his heart of rock
His metal arm gets ripped apart, his veins are bleeding ice
He curses her in anger, and tightens his deadly vice
She uses old memories, a girl he loved, that hurt him once before
But he uses the weapon that comes from deep within his icy core
But then she makes her last mistake, he grabs her by the neck
Images come into his mind, or him when he was a wreck
He remembers crying, at the destruction of his wall
He remembers the night, that started it all
And now as he stands with her, in his grip,
To finish what she started
He thrusts his knife into her mind...
and now she's broken hearted

written 9/20/87

Copyright © darkscorpio ... [ 2003-01-26 05:33:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Part II: Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 06:31:09 PM AEST
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darkscorpio, I thought your poem was well written, so I gave you a big vote, however, I'm not a fan of dark poetry. I hope you have some lighter ones. Bizzy

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