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Dead Child
Contributed by
Suit_Of_Armor
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Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:17:47 PM in AEST
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Dead Child
She died in pices, he inner child
There was that time at age 4,
At age 10,
At age 12,
And all in between
Those incidents destroyed her
With each absent part
Someting else filled the empty space
A creature of Anger, Hatred
Pain and Sadness
But The Creature hid herself
Keeping the face
Of a Dead Child
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Suit_Of_Armor
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2006-01-11 19:17:47]
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Re: Dead Child
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:38:02 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of poetry. You can tell by reading ur write that u have dealt with some major mishaps in ur past. I hope that I'm wrong. A well written poem. Thanks so much for sharing ur work with us.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Dead Child
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by WhyAmIHere on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 12:05:15 AM AEST
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| is 'he' suposed to be her? Other than that, good poem! |
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