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Part I: Creation
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The hunted's now the hunter, he prepares to strike back
His weapons stand ready for a gut wrenching attack
His armour, once destroyed, he wears proudly to show
That his wounds are now healed, he'll deflect any blow
He was once half dead, destroyed by his heart
and emotional battles that ripped him apart
The countdown has started, the bomb has no fuse
She'll die by the weapon, she preferred to use
One time he was helpless, couldn't hide, couldn't run
For once in his life, he thought he was done
The rebuilding took time, the wounds had to heal
His heart is now ice, his eyes made of steel
Any weakness he had, was destroyed at the time
Of the betrayal that almost killed all of his mind
His eyes are much older then his time on the earth
his skills are much sharper since the time of rebirth
His insides are metal, a machine that won't die
He anticipates war, revenge in his eye
When the war is started, all hell will break loose
As his hand of death will tighten her noose
written 9/14/87
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Re: Part I: Creation
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 09:48:18 PM AEST
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| Well titled, Darkscorpio! It is, indeed, someone on the way up. Hope no one got in your way at the wrong time! Bizzy |
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Re: Part I: Creation
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by the_wampum_pimp on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 09:48:11 AM AEST
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| This was very cool. The rhyming sounded a little forced in a few places, but still, an amazing piece if you ask me. |
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