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Word Brush
Contributed by
fearlessleader7
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Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:35:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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Red, black, yellow, or grey-
Which color shall it be today?
A poet's hand, so hard at work-
Painting pictures with only words.
Shading now, with emotions-
Dark, light, grey, in bettween.
The poet's brow, curved like his pens-
A truth not often seen.
Feel the rhythm,
Feel his pulse.
A secret lies
Within the lines.
His heart does race
At this pace.
As he shall close
This short prose,
He must pause
For self applause.
Copyright ©
fearlessleader7
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2006-01-11 18:35:52]
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Re: Word Brush
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 06:59:34 PM AEST
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A cleverly written piece of poetry penned so well. I like the way u brought this across to ur reader. A job well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Word Brush
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 08:15:23 PM AEST
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| It's a beautiful piece...but towards the end, the rhyming felt really forced and the whole tone of it changed-from lax and revealing to an old fashioned narrative. Sometimes, it's better to just let the words fall naturally... |
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