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THE BRAVEST KNIGHT IN THE WORLD
Contributed by
sassydovebird
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Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 05:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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SAY,HAVE YOU SEEN HIM,THE BRAVEST KNIGHT IN THE WORLD?
RIDING UPON HIS WARHORSE,HIS BANNER UNFURLED.
RESPLENDENT IN HIS RED,WHITE,AND BLUE
LOOK AT THE FAIR MAIDENS,THEY WISH HIM TO WOO.
HIS BACK IS SO STRAIGHT,HIS ARMOR DOTH SHINE
EACH MAIDEN'S PRAYER IS THAT "HE SOON WILL BE MINE".
THE CROWDS ROAR AS HE ENTERS THE RING.
THE BRIGHTLY SHINING SUN FROM HIS HELMET DOES GLEAM,
SCARVES THROWN IN THE RING,HONOR TO REDEEM.
AS THE BLACK KNIGHT AND WHITE KNIGHT FACE OFF ON THE FIELD
BOTH KNOW THE OUTCOME,ONE LIFE WILL YIELD.
WITH LANCE IN ONE HAND,AND SHIELD IN THE OTHER.
SAYIN HIS PRAYER TO THE HOLY MOTHER
OFF HE DOES GALLOP,HIS STEAD OBEYS ON COMMAND,
USES HIS KNEES TO GUIDE HIM,WEAPONS IN HAND.
THE CROWD ALL GOES CRAZY,MUCH SCREAMING AND YELLING
THE WHITE KNIGHT MADE A HIT,BLACK KNIGHT DOWN..
HOW BADLY IS HE HURT?THERE IS NO TELLING...
AS HE LIES STILL,NO WAY CAN HE RISE,
JUST LYING THERE PRAYING,LOOKIN UP AT THE SKIES.
FOR THE END HAS COME,THIS HE SURELY KNOWS,
AND SOON HIS DEATH WILL BE FROM THE MANY BLOWS
HE HAS RECEIVED AT THE HAND OF THE WHITE KNIGHT,
BUT HE IS QUITE PLEASED,PUT UP A GOOD FIGHT.
AS HIS LIFE BLOOD SOAKS INTO THE HUNGRY GROUND
ALL ARE CONVINCED HE WAS THE MEANEST AROUND.
MANY REGRETS,WISHES HE COULD CHANGE
BUT KNOWS IN HIS HIS HEART THE FUNERAL TO BE ARRANGED
AS THE LIGHT SLOWLY FADES FROM THE DYING MAN'S EYES
LIFE IS NEVER DULL,ALWAYS A SURPRISE
HE NEVER THOUGHT TO BE DYING HERE ON THIS GROUND
NO FRIENDS,NO FAMILY,NO ONE AROUND.
SO THE BLACK KNIGHT HAS LOST,THE EVIL ONE DOWN.
THE WHITE KNIGHT HAS WON.
ONE LIVES VERY HAPPILY,ONE DIES SADLY IN THE LIGHT OF THE SUN...
SAY HAVE YOU SEEN THE BRAVEST KNIGHT IN THE WORLD????
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sassydovebird
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2006-01-11 17:51:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THE BRAVEST KNIGHT IN THE WORLD
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:42:33 PM AEST (User
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A long poem, but a most enjoyable one to read. A very well written and detailed piece of poetry. The ryhme and the flow are absolutely great. Well done.
*warm hugs*
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Re: THE BRAVEST KNIGHT IN THE WORLD
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:25:20 PM AEST (User
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Flows rather nicely, expresses well, nicely done. |
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