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A Man Changed
Contributed by
hoist1atca
on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 11:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Stolen now am I into the darkness-
The shadow that follows behind-
A memory that became us-
Missing pieces of me no one can see…
Each day renders another broken heart-
Passing nights surrounded by shattered dreams-
As the unknown future ravishes my soul-
Making bitter the existence of love…
I linger within the desolate depths of solitude-
In my mind, thoughts traverse within a maze-
Seeking doors, which secure unanswered questions-
About love and all that I have mistaken…
Spent days waking up lost memories-
While darkness surrounds me, a haze upon my mind-
A man changed, becoming cold and hard inside -
Unaware of laughter, unable to embrace loves blessing…
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2006-01-10 23:20:26]
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Re: A Man Changed
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 12:51:02 AM AEST
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| amazingly awsome write |
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Re: A Man Changed
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 02:29:20 AM AEST
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WOW!! awsome write. I can relate to this so well. Keep up the great writing.
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Re: A Man Changed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:21:11 PM AEST
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One of the better poems that I have read outside of the circle of those I read consistantly. A very moving, and dark write. I understand and appreciate the way you describe the impotence of love. Something we all go through if we truely live. Sadness, I fear is the key to happiness. I hope you find yours.
Blessings
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Re: A Man Changed
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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this is brilliant-
...so much imagery..metaphoric..
my only regret is that I've just found this..
B |
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Re: A Man Changed
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST
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Sad, my friend but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Man Changed
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by positivelypurple on
Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 03:59:11 AM AEST
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I really love this line: "Each day renders another broken heart." We all feel hopeless and confused at times. I think we wouldn't be human otherwise. Excellent and beautiful writing.
Cheers!
Laurel
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