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MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 11:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Once I had a pet named Mr. Fritter-
Who was a funny looking critter-
For he was fuzzy and slightly blue-
And how he got that way I haven’t a clue…
His house was made from a mason jar-
Which I found under our rusty old car-
And it seemed to be for him just right-
For it was the perfect height…
He used to climb in the grass and play-
And throughout the day that is where he would stay-
Then at dark he would look up into the sky-
And wish that someday he would learn to fly…
But then he began to hide from me-
But then one day in his house I did see-
Standing before me was such a beautiful sight-
Mr. Fritter had wings and colors so bright....
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2006-01-10 23:14:30]
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Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST
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| ah how sweet, was thinking it might have been a hampster lol.. oh this is cute.. Raquel Leah |
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Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:05:49 AM AEST
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This is so cute!!!The story of a caterpillar that morphs into a magnificent butterfly. Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing this one.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: MR. FRITTER THE FUZZY CRITTER
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 02:41:36 AM AEST
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Nice write ,Light and airy and Happy . Thank you for the smile.
Whisper |
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