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Touching You
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 09:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Touching You
Today my heart stopped
As I touched your angels face
I was humble and thankful
You allowed me such grace
I said," You look lovely"
You said, "Thank you" with a smile
My heart whispered, "I love you"
" Have for a while"
You looked so together
From softly falling hair to stylish jeans
Every inch a woman
Desirable by any means
Even now my heart sighs wistfully
At the memory of you today
Trying to explain with words
What only hearts in love can say
If you hear my heart my darling
Then I'm certain you must know
What a joy it was for me
To touch you so!
Russ
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Lone_er
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2006-01-10 21:50:52]
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Re: Touching You
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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Oh how I have missed reading your wonderful work
Shari |
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Re: Touching You
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:08:57 PM AEST
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This is really sweet, you sound completely besotted and in love.
It's a nice change from all the heartbreak that I read on this site.
I'm going to look up some more of your poetry.
Have a great day.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Touching You
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:38:58 PM AEST
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*Smilng and sharing in your happiness*
Hugs Russ....
Jenni |
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Re: Touching You
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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Very well written-
A powerful insight to what a simple action from the heart can make one feel-
I wish you the best in your adventure into the realm of your love...
Joe |
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Re: Touching You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:23:40 PM AEST
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Russ this is the first time I have read ur work and I have to admit I'm impressed. A beautiful and very well penned poem that warms up the heart. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece of writing with us.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Touching You
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by fearlessleader7 on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:43:47 PM AEST
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Wow...amazing! Such a simple gesture...yet so meaningful.
Great job! |
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