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absolutely nothing.
Contributed by
sweetdreamsaremadeofthis
on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:26:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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---shudder
swallowed by layers of abyss
---Remember
Cold.
Dark. Your eyes quiver.
---recompensing stifled sighs of---
shadowed in my lips trembling; a tremello in the
moist gloom the grave
is silent and hungry, the
grave. . . steal away with me to
death unyeilding death
The Calling
cries the lounder
crescendo into nothing.
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2006-01-10 19:26:44]
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Re: absolutely nothing.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 08:29:05 PM AEST
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| dark...i love it! the whole thing is just amazing. i love the words and the feeling you put into the poem to make it real! ^_^ |
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Re: absolutely nothing.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:28:26 AM AEST
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An obscure piece of free verse.
I truly adore it.
It feels as though it is set in frames like a comic book...each carefully painted visual, individual to the next.
Abrupt and jagged form...giving shape to its content.
It is multi-interpretational...made easier with the breaks in the lines...leaving more for the imagination.
I enjoyed the personification " the grave is hungry". What an odd angle of thought. Very creative....
The ending seems very atheist.
I can correlate.
Great write. |
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