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Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:10:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i paint, it's true
it's black, it's blue
a picture holds my soul
i swallow numb
and then become
the dirt below the hole
God, i'm gone
been here too long
my candy's not so sweet
I pushed through hell
to see myself
my soul is now dead meat
..........
suffer
..........
dw
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Re: Help discover...
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by sweetdreamsaremadeofthis on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:27:41 PM AEST
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| hell yeah... |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 08:30:08 PM AEST
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| keep writing this was great! |
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by poetryfreak13 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 08:59:43 PM AEST
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| This is really good. You are very talented. |
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Re: Help discover...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:19:59 AM AEST
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Dwayne I have become a real fan of ur remarkable poetry. I have sensed alot of sadness and pain in ur life. You're a talented and gifted poet who has the amazing ability to be able to express your inner thoughts and feelings so well.
I can't point out my fav. verse cos it's perfectly penned my dear friend. I hope to see u writing on a happier note.
Chin up sweet guy and may ur days ahead be much brighter than what they are at present. I'm here for you always remember that.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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