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painted reflection
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:08:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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with my pallet of chaotic colours i paint my picture of you
with anger strokes and a hint of insanity blue
i started with a passive yellow to show your soul
and ended with a hateful black to fill in your hole
a self-righteousness glow for your so called halo
and a bone dust white for your face pale so
i started on this picture from the day we met
i new there was an aura arond you that was so set
my brush of truth i paint with hearts content
with angels of darkness my strokes are bent
and a splatter of the sky that surrounds your view
a mass of black because it is you
Copyright ©
lostrelic
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2006-01-10 18:08:10]
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Re: painted reflection
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:50:18 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really awesome.
Take care.
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Re: painted reflection
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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I love abstract! it can mean so many things but you can see the darkness and anger in this piece is it better to have a canvas full of blackness full of hate for the person? or one filled with blankness? a fresh start emotionaly for the artist?
Good thought provoking stuff.
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Re: painted reflection
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 04:42:16 PM AEST
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WoW Reagan a real thought provoking write filled with sadness. A very well written and detailed piece of poetry. I've missed reading ur work. Keep up the great writes.
*warm hugs*
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