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DO You . . .
Contributed by
longingfor
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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DO you . . .
Do you cry when it's raining?
Do you her what Im saying?
Do you need someone to talk to?
Does it hurt that your broken heart is see-through?
How do you feel when your friends
stab you and leave you?
When did the word friends have the meaning of ***** You?
Are you miserable when He has not one but Two
Are you sad when you’re alone?
or is it just I on my own?
Are you mad when he hangs up the phone?
Do you your friends make you feel uknown?
Are you angry that you go through such pain and tears?
And at the end of the day all people see is just the smile that appears?
Are you aware that no one wants to hear you Because they don’t care?
But when they come to you you’re always there.
How is it that God brought us together if we’re so different apart?
And yet I love you bastard so much with all my ***** heart.
Do you believe that you can scream but no one will hear you?
And you’d be surrounded by so many people but no one is there with you?
What happened to the good old days?
When love was a meaning not a word everyone plays
Do you ever wonder if you’re about to die Because you’ll drown in your own tears that you’ve just cried?
Have you ever felt that you’ve given Him your whole heart And he took it and made it bleed apart?
Do you understand what I am trying to say?
Are you blind, are you deaf or am I just insane?
For telling someone how I feel on my knees crying as I speak
Why can’t we change our past and maybe look into the future?
Why did God plan our destiny without warning us with the truth?
written by ~SASHA 1/5/o5
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longingfor
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2006-01-10 15:52:42]
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Re: DO You . . .
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by Lin54 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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The pain and loneliness--I have felt. When no one cares or there's no one around to talk to--I turn to God and cry and cry. Sometimes I drive and drive while crying and listening for God to still the storm in me--You put into words what I have felt time and time again--and all I can say is HOLD on to God--He is there when no one else is and HE CARES!! I know! Thanks for your poem!
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Re: DO You . . .
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by ElizabethLaura on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:15:01 PM AEST
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| wow. So much emotion. And I can relate to so much of it. Thanks for sharing your work. |
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