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A Four Letter Word
Contributed by
withlove_me
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It can hit you like lightening
Or as gentle as a breeze
Make you brave and strong
Or knock you to your knees
It can take away your hunger
Or make you thrist for life
Feel so soft and gentle
Or cut you like a knife
So many different emotions
It can make you show
Make your heart beat really fast
Or make it beat real slow
You look forward to each day
Because it feels so right
You look forward to going to bed
To have sweet,sweet dreams all night
Now what is it i'm talking about?
That makes you feel all the above
Something that moves Heaven and earth
A little thing called Love
I have felt all these things
There was nothing I could do
From the moment we first met
I fell in Love with you
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withlove_me
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2002-07-25 22:09:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Four Letter Word
(User Rating: 1 ) by PS_iloveyou on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:36:19 PM AEST (User
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Its always a good feeling to have what moves heaven and earth I really enjoyed this one alot. Excellent write! |
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Re: A Four Letter Word
(User Rating: 1 ) by markymark on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 03:58:57 AM AEST (User
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This is well written and such a lovely read, thanks for sharing it...take care...Mark... |
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Re: A Four Letter Word
(User Rating: 1 ) by chatabox on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:48:59 AM AEST (User
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I have a sound effect and I am going to use it...awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............
what a wonderful romantic write...good on you! |
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Re: A Four Letter Word
(User Rating: 1 ) by ginsdance on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:07:20 PM AEST (User
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WONDERFUL!!! BRAVO!!! This is awesome! Love it!!! (I know I'm gushing but this is so romantic and that's already been said a hundred times!) You put this so well!!! Keep 'em coming!
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Re: A Four Letter Word
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:30:15 PM AEST (User
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This is so sweet...and everything you say is so true...love can have so many different effects on you, but overall, it's a wonderful thing to have when it's not screwing you over like it sometimes does. Great write!
Moonlit |
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